DECEMBER

DECEMBER

A Poem by Theresa

Decorations light up the sky of night

Evergreens covered in snow sparkle in the sunlight

Christmas songs play everywhere

Envelopes are mailed and handled with care

Memories remembered and made

Boxes of gifts are wrapped and under the tree are laid

Embers burn in the fireplace carrying the smell of burning wood up the flue

Remembering those who are no longer with you

© 2009 Theresa


Author's Note

Theresa
I was bored and was thinking of Christmas so I decided to write something a little fun with not much thought.

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A wonderful Christmas poem. I love the way you structured it. FUN!
But the poem itself is beautiful. Full of warmth, love and fun.
A perfect tribute to this holiday.





Posted 15 Years Ago


Ah! That was such a beautiful Acrostic :)
I'm a fan of Acrostics, So I absolutely loved this one too..
The entire idea and the emotions behind the month of December or I should say, behind the spirit of Christmas has been written so beautifully here.
I absolutely loved it :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


It actually has quite a bit of depth, remembering loved ones is something we all do at Christmas time, it just seems the right time to think and reflect. All you say rings true, the sending of cards and the decorating...all dressed up to perfection in a fine acrostic...with amazingly beautiful phrasing and lots of color...befitting your subject.
Nicely done...

Helen~

Posted 15 Years Ago


Kind of a free-write, in a way? Those are useful, actually, and I plan on starting doing one of those a day to give my sulking muse a kick in the a*s.

I suggest changing the first line to "night" being the last word, so it rhymes properly with "sunlight" on the next line.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely.... a perfect description of the holiday season... especially love the last line cause through it all holding love ones past close is very important.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this alot
a very well written acrostic


Posted 15 Years Ago


In this acrostic, you've pretty much taken care of Christmas! Great!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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