I wish i would have said all that to you

A cafe, lIke every other facing a ongoing break-up situation between a couple and experienced something strange in the time.

The other man

Phone ringing🎶🎶
Boyfriend: hello
Girlfriend: hi, what are you doing?
Bf: leaving for office, just had breakfast & what about you?(in a rushing gesture)
Gf: just woke up....mmm... listen can we meet up in d evening?(with a pumping heart)
Bf: yeah sure
Gf: okk near your office place, the coffee shop at 5 pm (as if planned earlier)
Bf: but u don't like coffee!!!
Gf: ohh its okkk, i will find something else for me...
Bf: okk i will be on time

IN EVENING
(At coffee shop's premises)
Bf: hello gorgeous (approaching forward)
Gf: hi (grabbing his hand)
Bf: wht would u like to have?
Gf: anything ( nodding head)
Bf: so how was the day?
Gf: not good..
Bf: what day or days?
Gf: what do you mean?
Bf: there is something that you are dealing alone. Is there anything troubling you...pls tell me….
Gf: No everything is fine.
Bf: sweetheart pls stop faking it and tell me what’s it?
Gf: i knew it, you gonna ask me something like this... that's why i brought you here, where it all started. (About to burst into tears)

Bf: what is it?
Gf: i think it is not going to be worked out between us....
Bf: what? Why? what are you saying?
Gf: it's the truth, our families, our culture they will never allow us...and they trust us a lot...
Bf: what about us, our dreams and, what??they will never allow us. Is that wrong what we have done?
Gf: please try and understand....why don't we mutually understand this and stay as friends forever, even something is better than nothing.
Bf: please...will u try and understand it's not at all impossible....you are going way dramatic with this.
Gf: what...i don't know...i just don't want to hurt anyone and it counts you also.
Bf: yeah that's what you are doing...okk so i want some few minutes after that you are free to take your decision and i will never disturb you again in the life.
Gf: what??? Pls understand me &....
Bf: ohh i am here in front of you, and will not do anything stupid just pay attention to me for sometime after that whatever you will sayyy..
Gf: there is no need to impress me.. i know
Bf: No, actually you don't...now listen
I LOVE YOU & it simply means that
i love your everything
I love your parents, their insecurity when they see you beside me..even i feel the same when i see you with some other guy...ohh no...i would be feeling like dying... their cold scolds for me as if they don't like me because they are just seeing me like other guy stalking on her daughter and totally natural...but in time i will make it sure that it will be fine like it's today.
I love your siblings, their small wishes i also wants to fulfill like i do for mine...
Your morning cute sweetheart face when u just woke up, or when you are sleeping like mocking bird, your sudden mood swings and so many things
You are a queen don't let no man half love you….
It is a frightening thought, that in one fraction of a moment you can fall in the kind of love, that takes a lifetime to over,...
Like when u feel pain in your days i also feels helpless, when you are hurt i also got tears, so it's something beyond LOVE
& you want us to mutually understand all this just for an indefinite chance.
Obviously we are friends first and after that we are everything else but, after being everything for someone how can i just go away and lose all my life moments. Now, i die to talk to you in the whole day and then i will die every minute i will be talking to you. Your formal thank you and sorries will torn me down into pieces...So plss
Yeahh.. whatever you are thinking is just a possibility but "we had made many things possible by just holding on and trusting each other...can't we make what we think should be good for both of us by just being together again...forever....
We always get a chance in life to do what is really right and for me everything right is in your left...in your heart...for me from long so ever you are everything and same for forever...
.........A Long Silence.....
......After Sometime......

Waiter: Sir, here is your order...2 dark cafe latte...

Both drank coffee and left the cafe together...
Both comes frequently even these days and now with a kid...and rest is the story.

                                                         Thank You

Author's Note

My first work coming online, hope you will like it.
Comment for any queries.

Reviews

[lollypop]

How come that girl agreed in last?
As she was denying firstly, If the words of boy matter her so much, then why didnt she firstly agreed to stay with him?
If at first she was maintaining her family as the priority, then how come did all that got solve?

[Akash Sharma]

When we talk to someone & try to express the things then words are just like bridges which just let the travrl to other side but exprrssions and eyes trll the most important thing that is determination about what are you speaking.... so she saw everything in his eyes and other thing that is maintaining family as priority is everyone's stand today so it's Nothing new...but when those words and determination combines it forms a magic... which is just irresistable.... we are living in 21st century and parents have got transformed into a new thing today... so for them also this is not new... everyone takes time to understand AMD to make them usnderstand things properly we all just have to be determined and ready for chances....nothing comes to us easily we have to take some chances but any indefinite chance is not the right decision to just stop....so thanks for your review i think you jabe hot your answer and if not then just go to your spouse and don't talk on phone and try to see what are you getting in his eyes.... an eye for an eye similarly a heart for another

[Akash Sharma]

One more thing to start you thinking for is commitment... when we are up for relation we have to think thousand times bt after taking the decisions everything is just how you gonna fulfil your commitments.
Like suppose you got arranged married to someone on your parents decision and in time nothing goes right and on that note maintaining family as the girl's priority she will have only one option i.e to adjust, try to contain both families and what will happen everyone knows that. So, if we just trust the instincts and help our partner the task gonna be pretty easy even if things goes wrong the maturity your relation have got in time gonna wotk the things out for you. So commitment to be on determined path makes everything possible...

[lollypop]

I have do not any of my spouse.
As my ex cheated on me, he ditched with some other girl, so therefore now its impossible for me to believe in love or to believe on anyone expect my family.
Its rubbish to compare every guy as same as my ex, but trust is the only thing which the girl depends on,and if that trust is broken, then that girl is broken forever.
And many chance come and go but we keep on trusting again and again and getting hurt moreover.

[Akash Sharma]

You are wrong there is one person, & he is in your life only....no one can say a lie to me... and the guy you have now had never ditched on anyone as a matter of fact he had changed all your views don't take it wrong but you are hiding behind a pathetic false image of yourself only... i have gone through all this and statements you are saying are body without bones which gonna fall anyway... so try to clear things with that person

[lollypop]

Alright, thanks for your suggestions.
But, I am already on my way towards where my heart will lead me.
And we are here to discuss about your writings, so that's all we need to do.
And I must appreciate that you write really well.

[Suraj Verma]

heart touching... really nice story...

[horizon]

Oo god that is soooo much love the boy did...it is really painful...so much painful..each and every word of the boy was filled with promises for lifetime and infinite love..only one thing both came with kid means...?? Both of them were separated ???

[Akash Sharma]

no, they r with each other every second...kid is from them only...she finally agreed to him in the story....thanks for the review

[horizon]

Okk that is soooo nice that they are together...I just love it when 2 people who meant for each becomes one...

[Akash Sharma]

Yeah that's nice but for making thinhs nice two people jv to wotk together, single will gonna fall n fall very hard...

[horizon]

Yes...that's so true..may I ask one thing...is it inspired by a true story...???

[Akash Sharma]

I beleive that somewhere it must be a true story... m not inspire by it there is sonething else yo inspire me

[horizon]

Okk then...that's really nice...

[Akash Sharma]

Thanks for reviews

[horizon]

My pleasure.