Evil Angel

The freedom and happiness are all still there

But the pain rises up like and unexpected flood

And with it the chaos follows like a minion in the shadows

 

The walls of my heart

The ones the gaurd it from hurt

Have been beaten by the clubs

Of the mindless lies of that one evil angel

 

Like soldiers in a war

The line up in formation

Seiging my heart

Waiting for the perfect time to strike

 

And when they finally pounce

Like an animal on it's prey

The gaurd that once saved the heart from the world

Was destroyed like a flash of lighting

 

So there she was

Sword in hand

Army cast out

Burning holes in my heart

With the once beautiful gaze I loved

 

And like a serpant

She attacked

Dark wings propelling her tword the target

Slashing away every layer of the defensless heart

Until

 

Suddenly like a bear protecting it's young

A hero arose and fought of the evil angel

But not until the final blow was cast

Upon that innocent heart wich now lay cold and bleeding

Onto the solid ground

 

So in the hearts most desperate hour

And the hero defensless againts the new foe

 

The flood of pain washed over the diening heart

as the hero febely attempts to rebuild the protective walls

 

The hero will succeed

In due time

But untill then

The chaos and oain attack the heart at it's weakest point

 

Trying to finish what the evil angel will never accomplish

The destruction of the heart that she once loved

Reviews

[darkgurl]

This is so emotional and powerful. I thought this was well written