Freedom

Freedom

Is and unsuspected World

 

World

That came crashing down in Pain

 

Pain

Is all we Felt

 

Felt

Although through seperation Happiness

 

Happiness

Is what arose from the Rubble

 

Rubble

Of a relationship Undone

 

Undone

By selfishness of Both

 

Both

Feel the Hurt

 

Hurt

Is what shall Stay

 

Stay

For a lifetime in our Hearts

 

Hearts

Torn apart by Lies

 

Lies

That destroyed our Love

 

Love 

That helped us Learn

 

Learn

That goodbye can sometimes mean Freedom

 

Freedom 

Is and unsupecting World 

 

Reviews

[DailyWyatt]

thanks just the whole thing is true so i (in a) sense hate this poem

[darkgurl]

Hearts
Torn apart by Lies
Lies
That destroyed our Love

This is so truthful here, i can feel this. I like the emotion in this

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

this was a great poem. full of emotion. some of them were a little harder to understand due to some typos. those kiind of detracted from the rest of the piece. but other than that, this was a great read. good job.