Adoration of The Woman of My Dreams

To the woman of my dreams

Whose architect must be forever glorified

For within every fibre of her lustrous being 

Is illustrious beauty reflected outward 

Within sight of EVERY beholder

And any writes concerning her pulchritude

Are to the left of the span her seraphic wings...

Mystic gateways of the seventh heaven of her birth

She must be a goddess... this woman

Her majestic essence...

Magnifies God's craftsmanship

She pulls me in with her magnetic quintessence

I say, the radiance of the shining sun

Pales before her incomparable luminescence

"Beauty"...the definition of which her grace has made askew

It was the proverbial love at first sight 

And transcendental bonding on the second night

Then that was it...

Cupid's affliction latched onto me like an ungodly parasite

My reeling brain paralysed to all reason

Never knew I would fall like the season

Of autumnal magic in that time of dying light

When I lost myself inside her twinkling twilight eyes

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

Oh my goodness, this was so beautiful my friend! I am used to your darker works, but you came through to show a completely different side on this, though just as expertly as your other works. You describe her as though she is Aphrodite, which every woman dreams of being seen as by the man they love. The final line was my favorite, twinkling twilight sounds majestic.

[Rocans (Asher)]

:) I am glad you like it.

[icelandicblue]

This is perfectly lovely and your vocabulary is truly enticing. It adds an element of sophistication to the beauty you have crafted with your words:

She must be a goddess... this woman
Her majestic essence...
Magnifies God's craftsmanship
She pulls me in with her magnetic quintessence

[Rocans (Asher)]

Thanks a lot. Your words raises me up.

[Briana O'Connor]

This is so magnanimously beautiful. I love the sense of elegance and purity in these words. Very well done. Thank you for sharing.

[Rocans (Asher)]

...And thank you for reading Briana. It was just something that spilled out from somewhere, I am glad you liked it though. Thanks again.

[h d e rushin]

wonderful poem my friend.....dana

[Rocans (Asher)]

Thank you for that Dana. Now and again I feel obliged to neutralize my wayward writings with something nice. I am overjoyed that you like it.

[Rita L. Sev]

Love has a way of making us lose our minds... This is indeed a poem of adoration, a psalm of praise for that fortunate woman. Your words put common love poems to shame Rocans.

[Rocans (Asher)]

Wow, that last line was nice of you to say Rita. Perhaps my love poems would be even greater if I actually had the love affliction.

[Tricia Pattinson]

Smitten and happily drinking in the experience comes across loud and clear. i smiled at the ungodly cupid's apeparance and the surrender to that touching. Very nicely written!

[Rocans (Asher)]

:) Thanks Tricia. Dont know why I always write these "theoretical" love poems but...I am glad you liked it.

[BennyBooth]

you paint an interesting picture here... love in another's eyes is always interesting and looking through yours is no ordinary vision... Wonderful piece!

[Rocans (Asher)]

Thanks man, I appreciate that.

[gabrielle]

You had me at first stanza. I'm used to read dark/gothic poems from you. and i must say that you pen impressive love poem. So versatile.. Thank you for sharing this.

[Rocans (Asher)]

And thank you for leaving this review gabrielle. It is heartening to know that you like it.