here

I am watching you, darling
I crave you
but the distance is bigger then us.
I feel potent today
and open like a flower that lusts for the rain

I am open

I am seeking out comfort
in the form of eyes watching me as I come near
Waving hello as a smile possesses us
in good company.

Reviews

[angel gone bad]

that is really goo i like that it is short but you have put descriptive stuff into it i think that this is really good.

[Natalie]

Very nice, and descriptive. Loved it :D

[Mauricio Montoya]

Short and sweet.

[Norma M Sutton]

A nice short poem. Interesting use of words.

[Leech Wife]

This is wonderful; a lot said with very few lines. The best kind.

I also enjoy your playing of words. Love it!