You

It seems so selfless and benign that I can go to sleep tonight and think about you being mine,with your long hair and the thoughts that maybe you can learn to care.I find you so beautiful yet so seemingly empty because without you and without me I think this is the end of a brand-new century. Speaking to you is like a time machine that fast forwards through life. Speaking to you was something to cherish and something I was scared to try.

I can picture our first date or you being my life mate. I know your weird and that's wat I love because weird is a cure that makes love so pure.

I'm so afraid that u might not want me now. And I'm afraid to say anything just because I want you to be my bae..

I hope you see that I'm the guy for you and know that I might always be stuck to you like glue..

Life tends to pass us by and I think with you id be happy to die

I think this is to fast too much but please follow your hunch

Know that love is the goal that was met and now just build the life you always wanted to get

I'm finally happy after all this wrong and not to say that u were my fortune that could never be gone but to say let me be your baby, okay??

Reviews

[Kimberly Navarro]

I really like how you ended this one. Your most powerful line was the last one. I like the way you can put into poetry and in a such a simply way life experiences that we have all felt before and can relate to. Good luck my friend. Keep feeling and keep writing! Be blessed! Kim