Again!

Again!

A Poem by Deadofnight

Night time come and you get all drunk

how am I going to deal with this mess

you in again?

 

I want to hide in the closet or under the bed

I want to be some place you can’t find me again!

 

I am afraid of your friends J and Pete and

you know it,  but you still leave them here with me.

you don’t care  your to busy looken fly and getting

high to notice again.

 

The cops beaten on the door an I got  to say

no sir I aint seen him, you make me a liar again!

 

And you so trashed you just  piss your

self, and walk out on me again!

 

I ain’t going to do this ever again!

 

© 2009 Deadofnight


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Although it saddens me to read that you had to experience this I admire the strength you convey and the artistry by which you tell us this moment in your life.
Circumstances are formed after thoughts and words so your closing line is far more than an ending to your poem but to those type of experiences.

Excellent write!


Posted 15 Years Ago


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bey
i adore poetry made out of real life. the art of taking horrid things and creating something beautiful is magical.

this is a very good write. reminds me of the work done by early 20th century African American poets.

-b

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very descriptive and true to life. I enjoyed it very much!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is such a sad and painful read,
but is hopeful at the end (in the decision not to endure...Again).
If we could all learn from our mistakes, and poor choices
the latter days would be greater.


Posted 15 Years Ago



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I'm 18 and I work as a waitress in Mississippi all my home girls call me Dee. I want to be a writer but I still have to find my voice in words. I am kind of shy but I'm like working on it and once you.. more..

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