Look at me

Look hard at me boy what to you see?

am I just a flesh colored cum container

 to you or do you see something more.

 

You don’t even know me and yet you

keep tryn to get with me over and over

then you just leave and rip me apart.

 

I had to see you with someone

else left me wondering why the hell

ain’t I good enough.

 

You tell me cause she will and I wont

and I don’t want to cause you don’t want to

know me you just want to ho me.

 

so look hard at me boy and tell me for real

what you see.

 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Tell it like it is and demand respect... that was a raw rant worthy of a hell yeah.

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

This is beautiful!
I will forever admire a woman that understands how valuable she truly is and who also allows her mindset and decisions to reflect that knowledge.
I really enjoyed your poem.

Bravo for an excellent write!

[EmpressPoetess]

Demand respect. Good job bring that out.

[Marlena]

You tell him! Great job, great emotion!

[Lyrical Love]

Gurrrl I am cheering you on!
You are definitely flowing...
I feel the want for something better for yourself and
the that speaks volumes! I loved this!
Keep writing!!

[Deadofnight]

No! no baby! God that aint what I meant!

[Astrid Hamilton]

"A flesh colored cum container..."

(interesting.)

Well at least for me, if a deposit is made elsewhere, the container becomes closed. Forever.

But I like the 'no-nonsense' satire of this poem; revealing layers of a rose's petals as actual nonsensical
view into heart...of love...and maybe a baby.