Shouldn't be this hard

Shouldn't be this hard

why is this so hard you still teasing  me

though I know I know your ain’t coming back.

 

I trusted  you, an you said “I love You” but you

Diden really care.  You wont leave me again boy

Cause I ain’t  never going to take back.

 

I am all woman and whether you believe it or not

I have feelings just like you, soon you’ll needing and

wanting some of this and you can’t get none cause

what I got aint your property.

 

My tears is dried up now then you come crawling back

but you just want somethen you can’t have

you don't want us to last, so you can just go way now

cause it shouldn’t be this hard.

Author's Note

My first one but not that good.

Reviews

[Constance L. Hartwell]

The emotion was there and it was heart felt. I've been here many times before; it's a hurting thing to go through. Now, you DO need to work on your parts of speech and spelling. You do not have to follow every rule in poetry, however the two previous points are exceedingly crucial. I think you have a bright future ahead if you continue writing.

[Masq]

I think you express yourself very well. I look forward to watching you grow as a writer.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

People shouldn't judge on a scale of good and bad, especially when talking about art. I feel your struggle. I think your emotions and your pain is obvious. Keep writing.....

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Hell no it shouldn't be that hard... love the self empowerment as you come to the realization and lay out your feelings honestly and raw.

[17thWhitePrince]

This wasn't bad actually ... it made perfect sense and it all seemed to fit just right ... it was well portrayed and well formulated ... all the feelings that you wanted to show have been shown properly ... everything just works ... it's a really good poem for sure ... I liked it ...

"My tears is dried up now then you come crawling back
but you just want somethen you can't have
you don't want us to last, so you can just go way now
cause it shouldn't be this hard."

Truly a marvel in itself !!!

[Lyrical Love]

I agree with La-tes on all accounts.
However keep pouring your heart out on paper and save, save, save your words, and thoughts.
You can use them now, rearrange them later, or become inspired in how empowered
you become when you read them in the future.
sometimes things are moved out of your life something greater, and bigger than
you could imagine to move in!
Keep your head up Queen!