Inner Demons

Inner Demons

A Poem by dominic
"

I get up in 3 hours and I havent slept at all WHOO

"
You don't want to see my mind
If you see how I truly think
You would probably die
Because they are so dark

Very few people know what goes on
Those few people also think the same way
Maybe one day I can let you in
But today isnt that day
And Im sorry

Because you said the way I think hurts you
I know you feel terrible because I wont tell you
But I want you to know
I trust you a lot

If I didnt I wouldnt have said all those things; 
on the night

That night still haunts me sometimes. 

But I want you to know
I still love you

© 2017 dominic


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This is so amazing!! Just so real and life describing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Because you said the way I think hurts you
I know you feel terrible because I wont tell you
But I want you to know
I trust you a lot

beyond beautiful, wow!! just loved these lines og yours. very impressive writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


The 3 am thoughts. Rarely sweet.
"But I want you to know
I still love you"
I understand the above lines and I felt the emotional fight to know some kind of peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on March 6, 2017
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Tags: Depressing, Depressed, My mind, Thoughts, Sad

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