Everything I write is a fail

I'm having a very bad day

I think i've wasted my sin

I think im going to just give in

This isn't working

They just keep smirking

Bleeding my dreams right out of me

Always taunting and never letting be

I can't sit here and wait

And hope that they take the bait

I've broken my dreams

And can't thwart their schemes.

In the end I have failed

Hopefully this will be bailed

Everything I write is such a fail

Hopefully everything I write will take sail

Author's Note

This is how I am feeling about everything at the moment. Ignore typos

Reviews

[deeps]

Bleeding my dreams right out of me
Always taunting and never letting be

I loved these lines here.
This is so amazing.
I like this write alot.
Very poetic and has a wonderful flow.

[larryb]

Kudos for just making the effort instead of just putting on the TV and watch that all day and night :)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

you may be feeling that all you write is a failure, but i don't think so .. as long as you are writing and getting emotions expressed, you are not failing.
as for typos i make so many i wouldn't notice i betcha lol .. don't put down your pen ,,

Chloe