Free You Tonight

A girl fed up with loving a man who treats her like crap. Finally She sets him free

Can anybody tell me what I did today

And why- I cried- into my pillow

And for some reason I can't say my last goodbye

And this- is when- I will cry-mmmmm

 

And I still believe in Love

And I stil believe in life

I want to be alright

I want to free you tonight

And I still believe in Love

And I stil believe in life

I want to be alright

I want to free you tonight

 

And staring deep into your eyes

I know that I must let go

And I know- that the- stng has begun

The day is going by- as we passy by

I thank you for every I love you

and your life-mmmmm

 

And I still believe in Love

And I stil believe in life

I want to be alright

I want to free you tonight

And I still believe in Love

And I stil believe in life

I want to be alright

I want to free you-----

And I'm dying- watching as your loving. And I'm down here on my knees.

How can I survive.

Your turn to me and promise me your everything.

That you;ll be waiting

Till you have returned.

 

And I still believe in Love

And I stil believe in life

I want to be alright

I want to free you tonight

And I can't see you

And you have vanished

And I gave you the sun

It's time to free you----

Tonight!

Reviews

[deeps]

Oh Wow I liked this alot.
This is wonderful!
I can feel the flow

[r]

i can hear this set to some guitar chords and wahla you have a beautiful song. Who know it might be the next hit!

[Princy]

It just needs the perfect musical notes! ;-)

[hope.]

so. this is basically fantastic. and you should make it into a song. because it would be epic. i really like the concept of her setting him free rather than him dumping her off. that makes my day because women are strong. this is very well written. great job. (:

[Star Wolf]

Very emotional and outstanding poem. Your a very talented writer, that's for sure.

[Jeff Miller]

Amazing

[Terence Foster]

exceptional..that what it is....

[DarkLovingRaven]

That was so beautiful. I loved it. Well done! Please, NEVER stop writing in your life!

[HorrorMaster]

Very good, I love it. :)