Pain Lingers

The pain lingers

in the doorway

Yet it will never be gone

It sits in mocking greive

as i mourn for it to leave me and find

someone worse off then I

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Great poem and great imagery

[Senseless whatever]

Great imagery and expression. A tinge of anger at the sadness comes through. Great job.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Awesome imagery. I love the way you expressed the pain.
This poem is short, but it was perfect.

[Jinx's Heart]

Aww! Your simplicity is well used to describe your emotions. I love this poem's fluency and ease. Very nice piece of work. :)