Our scars

Our scars remind us

who we have become

Our anger will never let

us forget it.

My tears are eternal.

Your face haunts my dreams

And that is my only regret

Reviews

[SarahCortland]

this reminds me of everything ive went through and how our scars are a reminder that not only it happened but that we made it through what happened and it also reminds me of the song scars but anyway great job!

[Jeff Miller]

Short but sweet

[Dev]

Love this !! Really good write !! Short but sweet

[Star Wolf]

Short but to the point. Your words are powerful here.

[clemon73]

You dropped a bomb on this one. Few words, yet many emotions come to surface. Great job.

[Senseless whatever]

Excellent write. Short and yet full of power and emotion.

[NeverSurrender]

Very good. It's such a little poem but bears so much. I love every sentence in it. Really good job there!

[Alex W]

I would struggle to get such emotion from such few words. Kudos :-)

[HorrorMaster]

Very powerful for regretness. I love it, good job :)

[deeps]

powerful thinking here. I like this.
Deep and well stated!