I doubt you would

Would you die for me?
Would you try for me?
Would you fight for me?
I doubt you would!
I've hated you!
Since the day we met!
And if I see your face again!
I'll do something
I won't regret!!

Reviews

[Jeff Miller]

Nice

[Star Wolf]

Wow! Anger! Direct and to the point! Impressive poem.

[NeverSurrender]

I especially like the first 4 lines. The appeal to me the most. But it's a nice poem :). Short but nice. Keep it up ^^

[Senseless whatever]

Anger and sadness, often a dangerous couple.

[clemon73]

Good job.

[EMP]

this is really short... and that's the way it should be. brilliant. really gets across your anger. awesome poem.

[Alex W]

Die for you? Perhaps.
Try for you? Depends what i'm trying.
Fight for you? Definately! Though mainly for my own entertainment lol.

I like this, short and sweet :-)

[HorrorMaster]

A great poem about anger. Great job

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great poem about anger. the flow is easy to follow.

[deeps]

This is wonderful I enjoyed this.