my world

A Poem by The Water Queen

When I sleep at night,

darkness takes over light,

And in the morning,

When I wake,

Evil I cannot break.

© 2009 The Water Queen

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Katie Louise Hughes

This is great, short doesn't always mean it's not as worthy as other poems. You conveyed you message strongly. Thanks :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Zeitgeist Manifesto

This is an endless cycle. It scares me. You took away the most comforting part of the day and twisted it. I like the way you said so much, but left so much unsaid. Giving the effect with no cause can easily bomb, but you pulled it off without looking like it took any effort. That impressed me. Its simple, but it got to me. I like it alot.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Sera	nice rhyme skeem, and poem a very mysteriouse vibe Posted 14 Years Ago nice rhyme skeem, and poem a very mysteriouse vibe Rating /100

Michael X

wow, this is dark and mysterious, i really liked it.

Posted 14 Years Ago

zombiikillah666

oooo..... wish there was more. compelling :D

Posted 14 Years Ago

zappy

nice poem i really like it

Posted 14 Years Ago

ANT	Love it! Very well written. Posted 15 Years Ago Love it! Very well written. Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Water Queen

thank u

Posted 15 Years Ago

XxXCherriXxX

:D
i love this piece!
very very well written

Posted 15 Years Ago

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The Water Queen

Lehi, UT

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All of my books and poems are my work excpet the fanfictions. I own my ideas and my characters and will take rightful actions if i find them stolen. I have been brought to this world to bring the .. more..