my world

When I sleep at night,

darkness takes over light,

And in the morning,

When I wake,

Evil I cannot break.

Reviews

[EMP]

wow. what I love most about the poem is how you've managed to create such a powerful effect in so few lines. really good poetry here and very thought provoking.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Short but powerful.. dreams can reflect reality.. but it can also reflect anything we watch or see on a daily basis. When I have a nightmare (rare) I try to remember the events.. usually it's a reflection of a news story or event around me. This was chilling..

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem told a strong story. The dreams of our night can be the nightmares of our days. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Short but very nice, yet also intense in just a few lines.

[Alex W]

Very creepy :-D Nice.

[HorrorMaster]

Nice short poem. Very good indeed.

[An owl on the moon]

Your words form a profoundly perfect cycle. There is a darkness that cannot be overcome.. a depth of despair. Gripping!

[*Always be Me:)*]

oooo nice!! I like it, short and wonderful! :)

[R E Tree]

Sounds like a endless night. Quite fearful and helpless

[Star Wolf]

The day takes the role night usually has. Vivid and frightening.