Dancing through my Mind

A poem of…..love

My mind is like a pitch black room.

Empty….useless….boring

That was before him;

The man with the thick cologne smelling of lilacs and musk.

My heart is beating

Faster…..Faster….Faster

I am flying, soaring 

Being consumed into nothing but a dream

A cheeky smile;  

Stopping my heart 

Stopping my senses

My sense of reality all around me

He dances through my mind 

We dance slowly in synch

Our hearts beating rhythmically together

Slowly, safely, surely

A spin that makes me dizzy

Dizzy with love and laughter

Lasting for days;

Days spent with him

With that powerful laugh

I feel small and weak

Like nothing next to him,

Yet he says I'm his everything…..

Author's Note

Sorry if I messed up any grammar. I am new to this sight so it's not the best. I know nothing of love. ;D I wrote this for a certain contest but I think it is good for this one too.

Reviews

[Abby L.]

I love this! I wish I had a guy like this! It portrays love and the ups and downs and all the lovey dovey stuff and I just love it!! I love the ending when it's like "Yet he says I'm his everything" and I'm like "I wanna be your everything too." And… And… I just like it. could rhyme a bit more though ;)

[Ragan G.]

Thank you! I with I had a guy like this too! Lol. Yah, I decided not to rhyme for this poem because it didn't work out that way. Thanks for the positive comment!

[Abby L.]

I agree with this post
100%

[SmittyJas]

You done quit well such an expressive type read between the lines you head over heels in love this this new man in your life be safe and share a good laugh.

[Helen Crutchett]

Ragan, this is a beautifully romantic poem! Desciptive and flowing with 'love's energy' throughout. Well done! Thank you for submitting this to my challenge!

~ Helena ~

[Ragan G.]

Of course! Thank you!