Behind the Fence

Behind the Fence

 

they brought us here

far from what we once knew

to face our unwanted fear

as our time grew near

 

seeing the truth behind the lies

rushing us forward like dogs

wondering whether we'll live or die

as they stood over us like gods

 

our faith seem so sound

though we lost everything

while the world keeps moving round

are we to ever be found ?

 

praying with all our might

there is no end to this hell

our sould wont lose this fight

for those who saddly fell

 

the lord took us by the hand

telling us " we had survived "

he lead us to our own land

with a fine dust like sand

 

living a beautiful freedom

we will once again thrive

making this our everlasting kingdom

where we'll be happy, well, and alive

 

 

 

Reviews

[NightsShade]

Very creative! I also agree that it is a original metaphor.
There were also a few grammor errors but nothing that couldn't be easily fixed.
You have a beautiful writing style. Keep it up!!

[Casper Cross]

Beautiful imagery... so behind the fence is heaven? That's a very original metaphor there. Nice job