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I wrote this on 5/22/2009 at school.

'Twas never my intention a tyrant to be

never had  I waking thought

I'd place you under me

so when did I first endeavor

when did I first begin

to stifle others' hopes and dreams

when I aspired to other means?

The end.. Never reached

I did this to myself

so clear it is,

so cold it is,

so alone it is...

Author's Note

I would like input as to how to make it better organized, for it is not organized too well..

Reviews

[Butterflymom]

Another great poem. You express your sentiment very well, and very beautifully in all your writings.