Hasten, Time

I wrote this at school on 4/30/2009.

Time hath two dimensions,

one is slow, the other fast,

every occurence belongs to time,

for none shall ever last.

 

Legends are made to slowly fade

with time, all decays

nothing withstands the passing of days..

 

Good times speed from me,

whilst bad ones refuse to flee

but all wounds time shall heal

even those that time deals..

Author's Note

This is not a perfect embodiment of my sentiments and therefore is not too great.

Reviews

[Vain Apocalypse]

Another enjoyable write. I beg you, keep up the good work.

[bluessadmood]

Yes philosophy of time and life,so much pain and sorrow dealt all time
the happy days are quick to leave,the hard ones are slow and will stay
only one thing,if you understand life well.know what you have and what you expect
from it,so you will not be disappointed,you know your limits ,and your merits
you know how to play it fair and sound..you will come to terms and amends with life
it will not always laugh to you but at least,there will not be lots of tears
it will be a smooth life in the least..i know
lovely write..

[Butterflymom]

Wow, this is another wonderful write!

[Adept]

I liked it wasn't bad sort and simple. I tend to put up terrible work in fears my good work wouldn't really be liked and that kind of cowardice has put me in a funk lately, this had a sad feel to it that made me feel a little less alone in my sadness I guess and it cheered me up. So I enjoyed it and thanks for sharing.