Curiosity

I almost forgot how much I loved this one.

Do you recall,
What happened late last fall?
She was a profound little girl,
who couldn't help but to wonder around,
but sadly she met a watery doom.
For she was unaware,
the ice was as thin as a hair,
and before anyone could think,
she was already six feet deep.

Author's Note

ignore grammar & spelling problems please.

Reviews

[A. L. Allen]

So sad. I can see it all, yet you only show it with a few short lines. You have an amazing talent for that. I tend to be more wordy, and sometimes I wish I could use very little words, but yet show exactly what emotion or story I'm trying to tell. You have an amazing talent for that! Keep up the good work!

[Chuca1151]

Poor kid, if only she could not be so curious....:3

[Desiree B.]

So far I've read two of your poems and each of them (including this one) has an intriguing story with awesome imagery. Keep up the good work!

[Aella.lives]

I like how it's realistic, I can honestly imagine a child crawling around on ice like that. Good one, hon.