Sinner

I personally love this poem, it's one of my favorites that I've written.

Forgive me father for I have sinned,
Please listen to my pathetic confession;
I tried to stay in one direction,
But I could not hold my attention,
as I took the life of an innocent.

Reviews

[Desiree B.]

Nice short and sweet! I love the conflict and how everything is structured.

[Ubiquitous]

Rhyming scheme is great, flawless sort poem. Keep writing, as if you'd do otherwise. :)