Unemotional Piece of Toast

Wrote a comment of how I feel like an unemotional piece of toast and that inspired me to do this. :D hope it's not crappy

A toast

Brown and crispy

Just like my ideas

They have been burned

By the flames

The flames of stupidity

The toast

It's only there for one reason

And it's to be gone

By the hunger of humanity

One bite at a time

And if your not careful

I will attack back

By choking you

Till you cough

And then

I will escape

The grips of humanity

Humanity

Is out to catch me

Because of my texture

My taste

My everything

My brother's and sister's

Out there

Ready for there fate

There destiny

There future in this cruel world

This is the story

the story of the Unemotional piece of toast

Author's Note

My poem of an unemotional piece of toast. A crappy poem compared to the other good people who write poems. :D Is this even a poem?

Reviews

[McBear]

Oh my gosh! Glad I stumbled upon you. You writing style on this one highly interested. You compared non-living things to ideas and emotiond of the real world. In responce to what you wrote in the comment box; just because your writing style is diffren't, doesn't mean it is better or worse than anyone elses. What would be the point of comparing The Books "Moby Dick" And "Harry Potter," when they are two diffren't settings/genres? Saying one is better than the other is being oblvious to the whole point. If we want to truly see which one is better, we need to compare the books to other books of their own kind! Well done on this one, I really enjoyed it. Perked up my day a little :)

[John]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. And I might make more like this

[Frank]

I liked this a lot. Thank you.

[isus]

one of my favourite works here :D

[John]

Thanks! Glad you like this

[Eisho Shu]

It was good at first, but what happened? Some parts seem to have its structure fall apart. Though over all, it is still pretty nice ^_^

[John]

I don't know what happen but apparently the unemotional toast was witnessing his brother's and sister's being eaten by people.

[Eisho Shu]

I understand that part, but after I read it again... It was fine. I can't even remember what was wrong. I think I'm just too tired when I read and write the review. Though what happened to that unemotional toast at the end? Kind of want to know XD

[John]

He turned into a sandwich and was eaten by people. :D A good ending right?

[Eisho Shu]

yes, at least he got dressed up before the end XD

[John]

:D true true