Their Story

She loved him, and he didn't know how strongly she felt. I wish he just would have realized sooner. Extremely long...

If the world only knew,

Maybe they already do,

This can't be love,

Because she is an angel from above.

 

She has beautiful blonde hair,

hazel eyes the gleam like the sun,

A perfect body that every girl wants,

She was just perfect.

 

She actually cried today,

A tear fell from her eye,

I told her this love couldn't last,

It would have to be over.

 

As she left crying, I worried for her health,

I hope she didn't do anything drastic,

I hope she doesn't kill herself,

But all I can do is hope.

 

She went home that night,

She cried tell she had no tears left,

Then, she called him,

He answered and she said she loved him.

 

He ran to her as fast as he could,

He was just to late,

She slit her wrists,

There she lay in a pool of blood.

 

He was just to late,

This must have been fate,

She loved him,

The love between them was hidden within.

 

He held her in his arms,

She lay cold and still,

She held a thin piece of paper,

On it a little note was written.

 

He read her note and began to try,

He couldn't believe this was all his fault.

She just loved him to much,

Never to let anyone else have her.

 

He began to read the note outloud,

Here is what he read:

I am sorry this had to happen,

I loved you so much, I just couldn't take it anymore.

I hope you don't do the same. I'm sorry you have to read this,

and if it upsets you, Just know I loved you.

 

Both of them were found the next day,

In a pool of blood they lay,

He was holding her in his arms,

His wrists were slit.

 

The found the note,

But on it was something new,

Written on the note in blood,

It said:

I'm sorry that I broke your heart.

If you would have known how I felt it could have been different.

I had to hold you for one last time..

 

Their last words were never heard,

Now she lays with him in heaven.

Hand in hand, together forever.

Reviews

[hidden wonder]

wow thats really good. thats the same type of writting i post. i am a 14 year old myself, but my writting is really bad compared to this. keep doing what your doing, someday, maybe we will both find a way