I'm Fine

I've got my heart, I've got mind

Set on time, time, time

I've got a wish, I've got a place

That's purely mine, mine, mine 

There's a story I could tell

But there's no time, time, time

Because I've got a fake smile whispering

I'm fine, fine, fine

I've got a heart 

That's only mine, mine, mine

My head is losing all sense of 

Time, time, time

And I don't whisper, I shout

Fine, Fine, Fine

Because there is a delicate line

Between what is yours and what is mine 

There's a thinner line 

Between you and a waste of time

There's a difference between 

What I say and what I repeat

I'll keep saying that 

I'm Fine, Fine, Fine

And you'll ask me

All the time, time, time

But I'll asure you

There's a difference, there's a sign

Between when I was Fine

And when I had what's mine, mine, mine

Reviews

[Kitt]

Over all a good poem. When you broke your structure though, it lost some of it's power and flow. Either have it all structured, or all free-lance.