Green-Eyed Beauty

A Poem by Just Some Dreamer

My least favorite emotion, by far

Her eyes a beautiful green

Her voice, taunting, hurtful, and mean

Flawless, white skin caresses her beautiful face

Each hair, comment, and notion perfectly in place

She is one that fills the joyful with hate

She is the one drawing your demented, twisted fate

With each longing stare

With each time you compare

Her stunning figure glides on air

Changed, altered, she makes one vain

Cruel and gentle, she is a subtle, shameful pain

She looks innocent and sweet but the one to blame

For she has made you start this never ending game

The one you can’t control, the emotion you can’t cage

Swelling, growing, seeping with rage

And when I see her I want to scream

My insanity hanging on, dangerously, by the seam

I want to rid myself of this madness and tear her from her dream

This is a monster no one can kill

They don’t believe it until they feel her icy chill

She is conjured from you, from me

Evil but quite a beauty

Her eyes green, her lips red, her voice velvet

“Hello, my name is Envy…”

© 2012 Just Some Dreamer

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DrD

I didn't know where you were going with this but I was happy to see where you went. The descriptive quality is quite good there is an aura of suspense about it that captured me. Very well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you, that means a lot. :)

Tai Ryens

You've conducted emotions well, though in my personal opinion (in which you have no need to heed), I'm not too often a fan of the ending you used. Nonetheless, I see the point you paint across this. Lovely job.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Freckled Princess

I love how you used a story and human in sort of a personification. It has a harsh flow in my head- but not the bad kind. The flow of energy that it conducts is perfect. Very nicely done.
100/100 rating!