Something To Hide

Behind doors she shouts and screams

Outside she is a beauty queen

With a fake smile, she must chide

As if we have something to hide

She covers up his scars

Doesn't speak of Johnny, behind bars

She has cheated, she has lied

As if we have something to hide

When I paint across the halls

Her tirades echo, clear off the walls

She masks them and put on a smile, wide

As if we have something to hide

I see those who she clearly envies

She wishes we could be like the King's and Renvy's

She pulls away from strangers and keeps us on our side

As if we have something to hide

Its a miracle she has survived 

After all the secrets we have revived

If they escaped, surely she would've died

As if she has something to hide

So they picture is much clearly I see

The secrets are of her not me

Enraged, she has lied

As if we all had something to hide

I use my power

Send her into a gentle, little shower

I lose her in the angry sea and tide

Because then again,

We all have something to hide

Reviews

[DrD]

The closing philosophical touch is a very nice conclusion. The pattern is quite good and the theme is more than sound. I liked this and encourage you to do more.

[Just Some Dreamer]

Thank you for noticing the end part. That's what I was going for.

[Freckled Princess]

Johnny?

[Just Some Dreamer]

hahaha. Just a stereo typical name I fell upon. I had recently been reading The Outsiders, so I guess I was inspired subconsciously.

[Freckled Princess]

Ahhh :P

[Owlgirl]

Oh. My. God.
This is... Amazing.
Wow! I love the repition you used, the wording, even the flow is perfect.
As if we had something to hide.
The chilling echo of that word in the mind, the effect it had, sometimes as sarcasm, sometimes as truth, wow.
I am in awe.
Great job!!!!

[Just Some Dreamer]

Thank you. :) That means a lot coming from you

[Owlgirl]

:p thanks :) it's amazing. Utterly breathtaking.

[Just Some Dreamer]

daww You're so kind. (not to sound like the cheerlead :P) you're not just saying that, right?

[Owlgirl]

BE AGRESSIVE! BE-E AGRESSIVE! no I'm not, and that was an awesome high kick by the way :)

[Just Some Dreamer]

Ah! I see some grammatical errors!!