The Prettiest Girl

When the sands of time seem to stop

And there you are, perfectly still

All I can feel is my heart drop

The worried whispers send me a cold chill

Is what I see possibly true? 

Something so pure and beautiful, slayed

How can this be? I was just with you

I scream in utter rage, the world has betrayed 

And just like the my word is crashing down

I'm stumbling through the thick crowd

Let me be with her, away from this suffocating town

How has this even been allowed?

I want to run, far far away yonder

I need to escape the concerned stares and muffled cries

Take myself away from this, so I can sit and ponder

Leave everything behind, break your ties

Run far, let it be known throught out the sea, land, and world

We have lost the prettiest girl  

With no point to live, I'm open for suggestions

She was so pure and full of laughter

I've scream for God, full of confessions

Why have have you taken her to the after

She has the sparkle in her eyes

I think as I throw myself across her chest

Her goodness never will be reconigzed

Since you have put her to rest

I'm drowing in my own insanity 

She is my life

I need her to help me kill my vanity

No you've done it, ended it, with a sharp knife

When you do reach the gate

Know you are loved, one of kind

Let everything go, accept fate

Do not let this unforgiving world bind

Let it be known throughout the sea, land, and world

You have slayed the prettiest girl 

Reviews

[DrD]

A work where the theme is somewhat concealed behind cloaking words that suggest insitead of state. It is an appealing approach even though it left me with doubts and questions. I liked the progression and the probing of vanity and all was done with an obvious skill. Al nice job.

[Just Some Dreamer]

Thanks

[Freckled Princess]

I like it. I like the terms "slayed", morbid as they may be.

[Just Some Dreamer]

Thanks