Lucy's Lost Bell

He has fallen. He committed treason against God. He was the keeper of the bell. But it has chimed with the Grace of God.

If music has ever been the symphony for the lost-

Let it toll now.

Call those who walk among the shadows, let them no longer linger in the past.

But rejoice for the time they've resided in.

They, among others have been chosen for the rest.
Time, be suited best.

Toll for the scented at heart.

The lives of those who feel forever lost.

Deception with the host.

Toll the rings of guidance.

For without the lost-

Guidance would be sought of as absurd.

Let not it be deafened.
The music tolls against itself.

Fought against it's own nature.

It's host has fallen but that past has not defined it.
Let the waves reverberate against it's shackles.

Toll as the bell rings against it's nature.

For it was given guidance to live in different times.
Having guide the lost.

Guided by the hand that has projected light.

Lucy's lost his own plight.

But against it's own nature-
Music has guided light.

Reviews

[Bluefire]

"If music ever been the symphony for the lost-"
Suggestion-> "If music has ever been the symphony for the lost-"
This is a work of genius. The story and the way it's presented are amazing. I love it because it reminds me of both Daisya Berry from D. Gray-Man and a song called "Where The Lonely Ones Roam."
Well played! ^^

[ClockTowerKeeper]

Thanks for the suggestion. Now that you've pointed that out the sentence is a little harsh on the flow. I'll be fixing that shortly.

Er.. Genius? Ah ha ha wow that's extremely kind! I'm new to sharing my writing and seeing this caught me off guard. I wouldn't say that but it's heart warming nonetheless.

So, you were able to understand what I was trying to express? I was worried it might've been confusing and a little weird.. So thanks for reading and leaving a review! Also, thanks for the criteria! I'll have to give that anime a watch and the song a listen. ^w^

[Bluefire]

Yes, I understand it well. You're very modest. No problem. ^^