-TraPP'd-

I've longed for your touch,

for so long,

i thought i was the crazy one,

not to have you already,

but,

now that i do,

all that i want for you is,

is to leave,

not because i dont love you,

because i need to spread my wings,

without you,

now,

how do i tell you that?

 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Incredible !

You have compressed a lifetime of enthusiasm
and sorrow into a few words. Beautiful !

This is the essence of good writing, being able
and demonstrating the ability to speak volumns,
but using only a few words.

My Favorite.

---- Eagle Cruagh

[Zarathustra]

"I've longed for your touch,

for so long,

i thought i was the crazy one..."

Loved it.
Perfect ending and I think that everyone that reads this will agree with me when I say that what was written is flawless.