To Connard

I don't know why it hurt,
But it does
The only thing you swore to me you'd never do,
You did
Maybe you were right,
About the past you always hid
But this lost note,
Has a point that's minute
A feeling and a wanting,
100% truth
I'm not asking for you back,
You can't fix everything broken
Im asking for my heart,
Cause Connard you stole it.!!
I believed your lies,
And prayed for truth
I guess God couldn't stop,
My ignorant youth
Maybe you were a lesson,
With knowledge learned overtime
Or your another useless point;
A song or a rhyme
You,yes,you linger inside my heart,
The same you that stopped us before we could start
You didn't want me,
And to that I can see
But if ever you do,
I pray that you turn blue
Cause ill be gone,
So long
Like the end to a song.
And ill be happy,
Cause I'm free
Tamed not by you,
But by me
Single pringle,
In the sun
Livin it up,
Because I'm young
YOLO

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Check your spelling and grammar. I'd also recommend taking out the 'yolo' at the end - it's painfully juvenile and makes the piece difficult to take seriously.