Introduction

Excuse the title, it's refering to it being an introduction to a story I'm working on, pleased with it myself. I thought I'd see what the general opinion is.

"A tower stands at the centre of a cruel and ever harsh world. Once every five-hundred years its only door can be accessed by foot. Though all those to try reaching it find themselves hopelessly lost when the fog draws back in. There is a legend that inside is the creator of this world and the destroyer of the last and the power to shape things as you wish. But one must first defeat, Him. No easy feat for any normal person. But You... You're special. Unique. Go, and find your place in this world, or the next and never look back, Go my little dreamer."
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Author's Note

Feel free to be honest and critical, although a simple yes/no would also do. Just trying to see if it reads as well as my brain says it does. :)