My dream

As the sun sets

Over the mountains

I begin to dream

That one day

The world will be at peace

But I know

That day is far to come

So for now

My one and only dream

Is to see you smile

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Awe, so very sweet... and great. Nice and really good, i really like this. :)

[Kathryn]

I liked it. It was sweet an emotional wihout being too heavy, and really gve me a little lift :) Great work, well done :)

[Alicia Hirshey]

This was short but it was full of hope.

[Audrey Howitt]

What a sweet poem--and lovely!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

and what a lovely dream that is.......beautiful!

[Tasha]

This was short and full of meaning and hope. I dream for a better place too. I loved the ending. Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra