I see you

With every beat of my heart

With every sway of the wind

I see you

By an ocean side

By my side

Watching out kids

Make silly sand castles

I see you

Telling me

How much you

Enjoy this life we have made

We have each others love

And each others hands

But I need to ask

Will you be mine?

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A very sweet write, i like this a lot.

[Kathryn]

Aww ^^ That was adorable ^^ Great work, well done :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

very sweet!

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

So wonderful! Oceans always seem to bring out romance and love. :D

Kaitlynn

[Alicia Hirshey]

This was so sweet, that i caught myself smiling.

[Tasha]

This was beautiful. Great job.
♥ Ta'Shandra