I Shed This Tear for You

I just got threw another heart break, and this is what I wrote at like 2 in morning.

Laying in my blood

Listening to my heart

Slowly stopping

I hear Your voice

Nothing has ever sounded so good

I pull the knife out of my heart

Hoping to hear it again

But my life begins to fade

I see us kissing

As if it was meant to be

No one has ever

Made me feel this

My eyes begin to water

And I try not to cry

But my love for you

Is just too much

For I shed this tear for you

Author's Note

I personally like this one. So please give your thoughts and tell me what you think of it =D

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Beautiful depiction of how heartbreak feels.........that heart will love again.

[Tasha]

I personally loved it, it was touching and emotional a feeling we've all felt about someone before. Nice.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Alicia Hirshey]

touching.

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This is so touching and emotional. Tugger of a write, nicely done!