My last call

I called you 
To hear your voice
Echo into my ear

You call me
To tell me that I am a lie
So u will hurt me for an eternity

My last call
Was to tell you
That i loved you
And to say that i was wrong

Your last call 
Was to tell me
That you have found a new love
And I no longer have a place in your life 

I loved you
As much as I could
And to show you a life
You didn't have

You loved me
Just to hurt me
And show me
How bad love can hurt

I will never forgive you 
For I loved you 
And always will
And now I must tell you 
This is my last call

Reviews

[Murisaka]

devastating read my friend, it makes me feel.

[☯]

I really love this. The flow and the words form perfectly, and everything about it makes it sound like a sad, regretful love song. I can feel the loss and want put together. A truly amazing poem.

[soulsearching]

Good write!

[Kathryn]

Brilliant work, as always :) Great job :)

[Allie :)]

I LOVE the double point of view that you've slid so easily into this piece. Congrats, Jamie, I REALLY like this piece! I'm putting it in my personal library, just letting you know.
P.S. SO sorry that I didn't get around to calling you back last night. I noticed that you called (both times ;) but I didn't get home from church until well after 8:40. But I don't know why I'm giving you an excuse! You know I would've called back if I could...I'm rambling, so Imma go! MESSAGE ME!

[CharlesMonroe]

I can really relate to this :/ it's so depressing, it leakes with raw emotion and it breaks my heart. I'm sorry ): if you ever wanna talk I'm here to listen okay?