Tonight

Tonight I lay here alone
Under your smile
And under my pain

Tonight I feel
The true feeling of love
And the it's true power

Tonight I will cry
My last tears
And let my memories wash away

Tonight shall be my last night
Now that I cannot have you
And my heart slowly breaks

Tonight I shall close my eyes
Never to open them again
And fly with my fallen angel

Tonight I will die
No longer to walk to earth
And feel your love

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A lovely sad write..............

[soulsearching]

Very good...very emotional and sad!

[Kathryn]

Beautifully deep sentiments here, and your words fall like water. It's beautifully sad, and one of my favourites by you :) Well done :)

[PossiblyAlice]

This is very beautiful but im seeing a repitition for suicide here because sopmeone hurt someone else

[CharlesMonroe]

This is so sad ): depressing, but still beautiful. Amazing write (: