Disappearing love

What happened to our love?
It used to be so bright
Loving, laughing, caring
Then soon caught the night

You were my one and only love
Cared for you too much

Then something happened
And slept with that man
You deceived me
I never felt so desperate

But I try to forgive you now
And try not to think about before
I love you so much
It just hurts to ponder now

Everything I have
Is because of you
Everything I bought
Was because of you

I just love you so much
I'm scared to lose you

Reviews

[Tasha]

Aww, this is beautiful and so sad. You really penned your feelings in this, I can feel the hurt, betrayal and tears for this person. Tremendous!

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

Epic

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Love is scary and contains imperfections that sometimes are hard to get past. We have to remember that someone can mean the world to us but we cannot let them be our entire world. Wonderfully penned, and btw we share the same birthday :)

[soulsearching]

Love is beautiful ...but, some people are not.

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is beautiful.

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I like the specifics you put into this to paint a clear picture of a relationship.

[CharlesMonroe]

Awh ): to sad. I'm so sorry ): the poem is so heartfelt and real (: amazing

[roy mccarthy]

great write,
every dude has been there before!
i like the emotion you bring to the poem too!

[A.E. Surdam]

Such heartfelt emotion within. The love and desperation is apparent and the beauty is seen. Lovely write.

[Kathryn]

This is both tragicly relatable and utterly true. Brilliant work, as always :)