Thought it was love

i thought it was love
it was just bad luck
and i came to the conclusion
my love life really sucks
i'm not sure of my problem
it's gotta be me
maybe i'm too afraid
to face reality

i thought it was love
just my hormones kickin'
i look back at yesterday
oh what was i thinking

my fingers no longer count
the mistakes i have made
tears labeled why
seemed to end my day

and a beautiful girl
enters the room
her caring smile
ends my gloom
i get some affection
no longer am i broken hearted
it seems the cycle was just restarted

Reviews

[Tasha]

This was amazing. I loved the part about the cycle restarting. You are extremely talented!

[soulsearching]

good write..life get more complicated but, out of those experiences we learn and some of us write!! You are young and very talented!!

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Great rhyming and flow to this. "I thought it was love / just my hormones kickin'." I really liked that line! Very nice work.

[☯]

Very nice. I loved the simplicity and thought you put into the poem. A beautifully written and portrayed poem. Great job :)

[Kathryn]

'tears labeled why /seemed to end my day' Oh 'my fingers no longer count' the number of times I've been there. I love it :) The final line is pure perfection too :) Well done :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

and it will continue and continue. You will love and have your heartbroken many times before you find THE ONE...........well done!