If I die

If I die

A Poem by TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

If I die
Would you
Be there
Holding my rose
Beside my body
Saying goodbye
Letting go
Of all the bad memories
Forgiving
All my sins
Shedding your last tear
Understanding
I will be here
In your warm heart
My good friend
So do not fear
For I will be here
Beside you
Watching out
For your Tears
I will
Be your angel
If I die

© 2011 TheUnforgivinFallenAngel


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This is very sweet.! Very unselfish, instead of worrying about being dead you'd still worry about her. :) very sweet.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Simple and concise, and straight to the point! This was great and it made me stop to wonder!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think the short lines are nice; they make it a quick read. You address the questions that it seems like everyone wonders about from time to time.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Questions we all wonder about. Well penned

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like how the lines are broken up. It's quick, but it flows rather well. A person can't help but wonder who'll be there when they die, and I think this puts it into perspective excellently. Great work. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A sad and hopeful poem. It's simple, but also carries a lot. I really liked this one :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awh (: this is really pretty and sweet, and kinda sad...but I love it (:
100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


good job. its very quick and very good. I like the way it flows

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful imagery :) I love it, as always :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Death is always such a peculiar feeling!
We, being the incredibly selfish human beings that we are, want to know what would happen when we die, who would miss us? Who would cry?
But only a few of us would take the extra step to actually find out.
You've portrayed feelings of confusion, compassion, even a teeny tiny hint of betrayal.
I apologize for my having taking so long in getting to it, but this really is an excellent piece!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 9, 2011
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