If I die

If I die
Would you
Be there
Holding my rose
Beside my body
Saying goodbye
Letting go
Of all the bad memories
Forgiving
All my sins
Shedding your last tear
Understanding
I will be here
In your warm heart
My good friend
So do not fear
For I will be here
Beside you
Watching out
For your Tears
I will
Be your angel
If I die

Reviews

[falling_toxic_rain]

This is very sweet.! Very unselfish, instead of worrying about being dead you'd still worry about her. :) very sweet.

[Vanessa Rico]

Simple and concise, and straight to the point! This was great and it made me stop to wonder!

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I think the short lines are nice; they make it a quick read. You address the questions that it seems like everyone wonders about from time to time.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Questions we all wonder about. Well penned

[Kaygexx]

I like how the lines are broken up. It's quick, but it flows rather well. A person can't help but wonder who'll be there when they die, and I think this puts it into perspective excellently. Great work. (:

[☯]

A sad and hopeful poem. It's simple, but also carries a lot. I really liked this one :)

[CharlesMonroe]

Awh (: this is really pretty and sweet, and kinda sad...but I love it (:
100/100

[Sylo's Rose]

good job. its very quick and very good. I like the way it flows

[Kathryn]

Beautiful imagery :) I love it, as always :)

[Allie :)]

Death is always such a peculiar feeling!
We, being the incredibly selfish human beings that we are, want to know what would happen when we die, who would miss us? Who would cry?
But only a few of us would take the extra step to actually find out.
You've portrayed feelings of confusion, compassion, even a teeny tiny hint of betrayal.
I apologize for my having taking so long in getting to it, but this really is an excellent piece!