I'll Never Break

From the mightiest of all feelings found beyond deep within
This is my message… you will never break me! Never win!
Destroy all hope of happiness for the bond of love is taken
Arise shall I when a new day dawns, my eyes will awaken
Cursed by love as life is shaken inches away from being forsaken.

Taste the bitter sweet empathy as hopes & dreams turn to ashes
Night to day with haunted memories that forever flashes
Frequent screams to the world around as existence slowly crashes,
Pain infects our unknown depts I ride the road of harsh reality
Deceitful games played by life while edging closer to final fatality.

Tough times pollute stale air as feelings becomes too much to bare
Sneaking through tainted darkness with no one seemingly there,
Battle loves voice as it does what it pleases, just to make us feel small
If you cut me I bleed, even scratch me I mark, but if you push me I fall
I’ll arise again even if I drown because nothing will ever keep me down!

Take everything that’s possible still leave me with nothing at all
Breaking my body even lay sharp nails seemingly enhancing the fall
I’ll always get up and continue the fight for loves true call,
So from the mightiest of all feelings found beyond deep within
This is my message… you will never break me! You will never win!

Reviews

[Alicia Hirshey]

The has amazing reason behind it, you are amazing with words. I only wish I was half the writer that you are.

[DearSweetAgony]

I Love the whole reason behind this write.
You are VERY,VERY good with words.
Great Job!

[CharlesMonroe]

This is really good (: all of you're writing just gets better and better (:

[Rediscovery]

This was a strong read! I loved the rhyme in it. Another great job!

[Allie :)]

I think that you definetly could have made STANZAS! You're rhyming, flow, and rhythm is a little off, but this piece in its entirety is fantastic, and you really outdid yourself :)
Great job!

[Katub]

Wow, this is great, it shows how strong you are and how you wont fall to anyone or thing :D xxx

[Kathryn]

fantastic work, well done!

[A.E. Surdam]

Excellent! Great read.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow, you sure do write a lot. thats awesome that you never seem to lack inspiration though, and this is another very well written piece