I'll Pretend

I'll Pretend

A Poem by TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

You have always been there for me, every day of the year.
You helped me through everything, and wiped away my tears.
You made me feel special, like no one had before.
You had me addicted; I just kept coming back for more.

 

And Im still addicted, I just cant help myself.
For this past year, there has been no one else.
I dont know why Ive loved you, for so long.
But I have to say, it doesnt feel wrong.

 

In fact, it feels more right, than anything yet.
Its just my feelings that I dont quite get.
Why have I loved you, for what seems like forever?
Why do I love you, when were not even together?

 

I dont know the answer, but it doesnt matter.
The answer wont tell my heart not to shatter.
So Im just going to go on and act like Im okay.
Pretend that I dont love you, like I do everyday.

© 2011 TheUnforgivinFallenAngel


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Great job--it's a topic that's been covered many times, but you put your own spin on it with the excellent way you phrase the words and rhyme them.

Posted 13 Years Ago


http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Best-%22getting-over-heartbreak%22-poem/13557/


you should enter this into my contest btw..

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is amazingg...

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow. I think i might even know who this is about but little miss Sy sy will keep her big mouth shut. It was very intriging. not like the ones you did about her.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It seems so sad. I would not know because I have never felt the feelings of loving other or a man at all. Maybe a crush but those are not the strong feelings of love or passion. But you have captured this feeling very well. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have never been in love, but this poem is great for someone who is. I love the deep message to it and the rhyming as well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can definitely relate to this due to recent events. Your works never fail to surprise me with such depth in your writing. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this (: I really relate to this to, great job (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem reminds me of myself :'(
You put in all the right feelings and emotions = Perfect

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are wonderful. Amazing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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