If.......

If the language of love is UN-ending
then why am I so lost for words?
if there is reason and rhyme in poetry
then why can’t I simply be heard?

If the heart knows no boundaries in loving
and the soul nows how to find its own twin,
then how come my heart and my soul are alone
and I feel so much emptiness within?

If your eyes can seek out so much beauty
and your senses can evolve everyday,
then why are my eyes and my senses so weak
and why do they control me this way?

I try everyday to be strong Love
and I pray every night for your smile,
If I ache every moment that we are apart
then I wonder if this has all been worth while.

How much longer must I ache for your presence?
How many hours must I long for your touch?
And how many times must I whisper these words
“My Darling I miss you so much.”

Reviews

[Sylo's Rose]

very good it was nice

[A.E. Surdam]

I love it. A great read and so much emotion. Exquisite.

[Rediscovery]

Again, this is an amazing poem. Your poems have strong messages of love toward another, I love them!

[Katannaism]

Love it! Such beautiful words and emotions being expressed into such an amazing piece of literary art! This is truly amazing. Do keep it up!

[DearSweetAgony]

On the sixth line it says
"and the soul nows how to find its own twin,"
Was it supposed to say "Nows" or did you mean "Knows?"
Anyway it doesn't really matter,
I LOVE it anyway!
I Adore your way of writing!
It is so beautiful!
Great Job!
(Once again)

[Katub]

Like its been said before, one of your best works xxx

[Tasha]

This was so amazing. I agree this is one of your best works yet. I enjoyed.

[Kathryn]

I love it. Beautiful work, and one of your best works, i think :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

best one of your poems yet, your writing just gets better and better

[Vanessa Rico]

I readily admit I am not expert on poetry; I am more of a novel type of girl. However, I did enjoy reading this, because to me it warmed my heart! Well written!