Brumal Flame

I wrote this back in 7th grade. I still like it to this day.

teeter on the edge of sleep
blissful grasp of opiate dreams
in and out, I fade and return
frostbitten heart can not burn
I care not, except for ecstasy
as I kiss you away from me
become immune to your cold will
my mind becomes a winter's chill
maybe tomorrow, when I return
I will teach my love to learn
If I live before I wake

Reviews

[Rediscovery]

This was another great read from you.

[Kathryn]

lovely imagery, i love this one :) well done :)

[State of Grace]

Very emotional, love it! :)

[A.E. Surdam]

Beautiful. Gorgeous. I love this. Very emotional. "I care not, except for ecstasy as I kiss you away from me." Lovely.