Undying love for your blood

Pedals feather fall to the ground
hand grasped around the thorns upon the rose
the blood drips...
clusters of pain engulfs his heart

the sadness always found
no its not over dramatic , no its not for show
every word said is pure pain when it flows through his lips
the fact of the matter is that agony tore him apart

the season of blood is unified
the rose relys on his blood
the thorns... more then lodged in his skin

his absolute sadness cant be described
the depression has sent his self esteem under a flood
words cant describe what still drives him

actions have put me to thought and i figured it out!
he bears depressions weight so he can get stronger and fight anything

Reviews

[Rediscovery]

Great job TheUnforgivinFallenAngel. The depressing feel to it makes it feel dark as well.

[A.E. Surdam]

Wow, very deep. I love it.

[Kathryn]

another lovely piece, well done :)

[State of Grace]

Great poem as always :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Petals feather, fall to the ground
clusters of pain engulf his heart
it's not over dramatic, it's not for show
the rose relies on his blood
his absolute sadness can't be described
words can't describe what still drives him
actions have put HIM to thought and HE figured it out

Very inspirational and quite a deep introspection here......good poem