Crying

I know I promised I'd never make you cry;
I know it hurts but please dry your eyes.

I will give to you whatever you need;
A hug, a kiss, just tells me please.

To see you cry is a terrible sight;
Just let me love you and I'll hold you tight.

I'll do anything you want to make you proud;
I'll climb the highest peak and yell your name aloud.

I love you to much to see you cry;
Please sweetheart don't say goodbye.

Don't push me away I must stay near;
To gently wipe away your tears.

If we must truly say goodbye;
One more time just close your eyes.

And let us share one final kiss;
For you are the love, I will forever miss.

© 2011 TheUnforgivinFallenAngel

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Rediscovery

Awww! I love it. I love the story of the speaker telling their love to not to go.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Emily B

when I was your age, I wrote lots of poetry. My teachers all encouraged me, I wanted to grow up to be Emily Dickinson. Somewhere along the way I lost my voice, and what grew out of that was truer than I could have imagined.

I've read those old poems from my childhood. I probably wouldn't line the bottoms of bird cages with those. I hold onto them, though, to remind me where I came from.

You have a love for words in your heart. It will grow. I would encourage you to read many, diverse poets. Rumi, Robert Frost, William Carlos Williams,

there are many talented poets among us, Zatoichi, Ed Hart, raining, Angelo Canteras

welcome to the cafe!

Posted 13 Years Ago

A.E. Surdam

So romantic. Just takes my breath away.

Posted 13 Years Ago

HopelesslyDevoted

I love you to much to see you cry;
Please sweetheart don't say goodbye.

awww so sweet.... what beautiful love you write

Posted 13 Years Ago

Katub

I can easily relate and I love it.
ANother brilliant write, I wish i knew where you got your inspiration from!!

I love you to much to see you cry;
Please sweetheart don't say goodbye.
those were your best lines I think, thought it was hard to chose :)