Crimson blood and Poison Tears

Rain, rain, go away,
Because of you the pain will stay.
Slit my throat, cut out my heart,
Leave me here, tear it apart.

Poison tears stream down my face,
My heart beats at a steady pace
As I try to stand again;
Alone and standing in the rain.

I don’t need you anymore…
Is what I think while tears pour.
I hate you like I hate my life;
But love is what cuts like a knife.

Love is death and death is you;
Its pain stains like a black tattoo.
Those memories come back again
And bind me in the ropes of pain.

Crimson blood streams down my head
Like a long, silk ribbon, tied by a thread,
To a platinum bullet, a hole in my skull…

...Now just a memory that’s faded and dull.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Painful and hard hitting truth. Loved the rhyme.

[DearSweetAgony]

Very,very good.
I enjoyed reading this.
Great Job!

[A.E. Surdam]

Very poetic, and inspiring. Love it.

[Kathryn]

'Love is death and death is you;' was a brilliant way to strat a verse, and a perfect way to tie your verses together. Beautifully written - well done again :)

[Tasha]

Wow, this was amazing, and truly an outstanding job!

[State of Grace]

I can really relate to this poem and I love the last verse! Fantasic job! :)